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yeeesss trulyyy. it's a good plot and story but it felt so ruuushed.
I agree with everything you said. The author utilizes some trope that are otherwise seen as overly clich in such a good way. Unfortunately it did fall under the curse of having to little time for so many things. I truly believe if it didn't end so quickly it would be 100% a masterpiece in my opinion.
i rlly loved the story especially at the start where it built up the ml and fl's romantic connection in a way that may seem very "oh this only happens in stories" BUT THEY DO IT VERY GOOD. what i am sad about this is that they started making this very rushed and there are many plot points that could've been built up to be suspenseful and actually contribute to the story flow but instead, it was reduced to a single chapter with details that are actually important but overlooked. i hated that the main villain could've been more scary and an actual threat but because of the rushing, the writing turned into somewhat a bad fanfic.
as you can see there are so many COULD HAVEs that are actually SHOULD HAVEs in my review. this is such a good story how could they make it go to waste (╯°Д °)╯╧╧