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i mean, they are in a story written by a highschooler
The badly written plot and plotholes are NOT intentional
If author wanted to show that theyre in a story written by a highschooler then they could put in really badly written cliches, but literalky every aspect of the whole plot is badly done
No problem with the mc, but the plot…
Stupid plotholes, overall weak plot, tries too hard to be funny and lacks any depth
Overall bad storyline and writing- mc isbt flawed,js a result od bad character writing resulting from an author trying to write an overly “humorous” Mary Sue character