End review, the writing on this left an impression on me. It adds up that this was the author's first comic and that the viewers had a play on how the story turned out. Nonetheless, I think they were able to clean up and stitch it together nicely. There are plenty of things that could have been better, for example the ending was pretty flimsy. But I think it was good for amateur work, I've read much worse. The exposition was done pretty well and the character's actions feel realistic for their mindset, it was a satisfying read. The second couple felt a bit out of place, but it wasn't bad since their relationship had been foreseen. These tropes aren't my thing, nor are the dynamics, or duo sibling relationships. But the writing pulled through for me though and I was able to enjoy it a decent amount anyways. I look forward to the author's next series.
End review, the writing on this left an impression on me. It adds up that this was the author's first comic and that the viewers had a play on how the story turned out. Nonetheless, I think they were able to clean up and stitch it together nicely. There are plenty of things that could have been better, for example the ending was pretty flimsy. But I think it was good for amateur work, I've read much worse. The exposition was done pretty well and the character's actions feel realistic for their mindset, it was a satisfying read. The second couple felt a bit out of place, but it wasn't bad since their relationship had been foreseen. These tropes aren't my thing, nor are the dynamics, or duo sibling relationships. But the writing pulled through for me though and I was able to enjoy it a decent amount anyways. I look forward to the author's next series.