.. i have re read it a few times. Its quite dark with the upperclass story but I love Lin and Lele story. The thing I hate the most is the rushed ending chapters it felt rushed and squeezed into. Spoiler...
I hate that Long ended up with Amber was totally not needed and silly, first of all his mind is basically a 12-14 years old thats really weird as he always acts this age. But its not just that its that I felt because of his traumatic life and all events prior he should have had some time to be free. He isn't alone as he is surrounded by his ppl and Lin. He was basically held hostage by his nasty ass Father who pimped him out to old men and women. Then he was wild when he was a model then later became trapped in a 2 year 'relationship' contract with that guy to free his brother. Dont you think he just needs to be a free agent for a while. That would have been so much better. Plus it hurt alot that he was basically allowed to have that while Lin had to leave Lele because of him. Also, how the heck was there no consequence for what he did to Lele and also to Yang. Lastly, after his memory returned he magically was a nice guy again without have a brother complex? That part was so silly. The bit that annoyed me the most was when he overheard Lin and Taylor talking about how Lin sacrificed his gf for him and Amber lied and told him he was talking about Feidna!!! (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
.. i have re read it a few times. Its quite dark with the upperclass story but I love Lin and Lele story. The thing I hate the most is the rushed ending chapters it felt rushed and squeezed into. Spoiler...
I hate that Long ended up with Amber was totally not needed and silly, first of all his mind is basically a 12-14 years old thats really weird as he always acts this age. But its not just that its that I felt because of his traumatic life and all events prior he should have had some time to be free. He isn't alone as he is surrounded by his ppl and Lin. He was basically held hostage by his nasty ass Father who pimped him out to old men and women. Then he was wild when he was a model then later became trapped in a 2 year 'relationship' contract with that guy to free his brother. Dont you think he just needs to be a free agent for a while. That would have been so much better. Plus it hurt alot that he was basically allowed to have that while Lin had to leave Lele because of him. Also, how the heck was there no consequence for what he did to Lele and also to Yang. Lastly, after his memory returned he magically was a nice guy again without have a brother complex? That part was so silly. The bit that annoyed me the most was when he overheard Lin and Taylor talking about how Lin sacrificed his gf for him and Amber lied and told him he was talking about Feidna!!! (╯°Д °)╯╧╧