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I didn't even notice the title changed until i read your comment and you're right idk how heat stroke relates to this story. Im thinking heat stroke > medical emergency
I agree it sounds boring and I also like the old title more
I liked the previous title more. Yeah it was kinda ridiculous but it suited the story and its overall tone much more. Heat stroke is just so average and I probably wouldn't have even started reading it.
Am I overthinking it? What do you all think?