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Character depth and writing

StellarIX January 13, 2026 8:54 am

The author has some of the most questionable takes when it comes to writing and showing character depth. I rlly did not like how she let hyesung’s trauma slide so easily (eg. hyesung being raped by dojin and hyesungs trauma with his mom just for dojin to go behind his back)

I sometimes think about how she’s very biased when it comes to this. Especially since most often than not dojin is received by the audiences in this positive light, and hyesung a tad bit negative.

Now I’m seeing another trend of ppl always misjudging characters. Yes siwoo is very wrong for that. But I took this in the context that they’re both are very hormonal teens/pre-adult. Making this questionable yes but very much ..real? (Ik not all will agree) but he is so obviously infatuated with byul and try did repress it for a long time, so personally I did see this happening.

Now I am personally not fond of byul, not only is he insensitive and he is also avoidant .

I hope she makes this story better, I hope this doesn’t get to the point where she writes byul getting sexually assaulted and then slides it off after a few chapters cuz “they’re in love” im so sick of that shit.

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