Oh wow I often feel conflicted after reading stories because of some forsaken elements or authors' clumsiness, but shit, this one is another level of frustration!
Ok first, gotta complain: the art is not really good, which kinda sucks. 2nd, this story was more complicated than complex, the rythm was chaotic and the two together made it hard to enjoy the story. And last but not least, it IS badly written, character wise. Let me develop before other readers trash me even though they will anyway: The author was so focused on the protagonists, and there were so many of them, that they incorporated the background characters not as humans but as items. The memory thing certainly explained how the protagonists lived the way they did, but their whole entourage wasn't written as humans but as items that don't think and live, but just go with the flow of the on going situation.
( For example let's take Yisin's parents. They were never his parents since the dude is actually thrice their age yet the story shows them as just his(bad, bad!!! Bombastic side eyes!)parents at the very moment in the situations where they appeared. They literally never birthed him, raised him, and see him grow but they were his (bad bad bad!!!) parents in a few panels because the story needed to confuse the reader for the in coming twist) So like I said, the background characters weren't written as actual humans but just convenient items at the moment.
Since I was very intrigued by the story I did notice these kinds of problems but at this point, it's most likely I'm just being an annoying bitch, yet it did bother me and lowered my appreciation.
Alright, now that I'm done complaining; The two stories were actually interesting, and the way they merged too! I was really immersed in the cannibal cult plot, my interest kinda froze when super human experimental boys popped out of nowhere and got curious again when the two parallel plots started to merge, so the whole thing was pretty satisfying. I think more work could have been done to make it less confusing, smoother, but it wasn't that bad. The end (the cult plot's ending*) wasn't rushed to just focus on a little happy ending romance and these crazy ass anthropophages lot dying together felt right.
The romance... Meh. I mean, I still don't understand the protagonists powers so it kinda feels incomplete and um, conveniently patched up just to put these two together at the end, so I'm not even interested in their couple.
I almost dropped it at chapter 1, seriously shoving a nameless erased dick in a nameless upside down mouth is not the best way to get to me, especially when you have so much to tell, it started pretty badly.
Oh wow I often feel conflicted after reading stories because of some forsaken elements or authors' clumsiness, but shit, this one is another level of frustration!
Ok first, gotta complain: the art is not really good, which kinda sucks.
2nd, this story was more complicated than complex, the rythm was chaotic and the two together made it hard to enjoy the story.
And last but not least, it IS badly written, character wise.
Let me develop before other readers trash me even though they will anyway:
The author was so focused on the protagonists, and there were so many of them, that they incorporated the background characters not as humans but as items. The memory thing certainly explained how the protagonists lived the way they did, but their whole entourage wasn't written as humans but as items that don't think and live, but just go with the flow of the on going situation.
( For example let's take Yisin's parents. They were never his parents since the dude is actually thrice their age yet the story shows them as just his(bad, bad!!! Bombastic side eyes!)parents at the very moment in the situations where they appeared. They literally never birthed him, raised him, and see him grow but they were his (bad bad bad!!!) parents in a few panels because the story needed to confuse the reader for the in coming twist)
So like I said, the background characters weren't written as actual humans but just convenient items at the moment.
Since I was very intrigued by the story I did notice these kinds of problems but at this point, it's most likely I'm just being an annoying bitch, yet it did bother me and lowered my appreciation.
Alright, now that I'm done complaining;
The two stories were actually interesting, and the way they merged too!
I was really immersed in the cannibal cult plot, my interest kinda froze when super human experimental boys popped out of nowhere and got curious again when the two parallel plots started to merge, so the whole thing was pretty satisfying.
I think more work could have been done to make it less confusing, smoother, but it wasn't that bad. The end (the cult plot's ending*) wasn't rushed to just focus on a little happy ending romance and these crazy ass anthropophages lot dying together felt right.
The romance... Meh.
I mean, I still don't understand the protagonists powers so it kinda feels incomplete and um, conveniently patched up just to put these two together at the end, so I'm not even interested in their couple.
I almost dropped it at chapter 1, seriously shoving a nameless erased dick in a nameless upside down mouth is not the best way to get to me, especially when you have so much to tell, it started pretty badly.
Now I'm kinda looking forward to the next season?