the earlier chapters are off in translation but i got by so its fine.
i love that theres sooo many intrigues. it starts off pretty typically for an isekai, and i thought the problems was just going to be as typical but its actually pretty complex.
one problem that i have is that MC pretty much has very little if none of the sense of danger/urgency. i get that she really thought this was a game, and she got ahead by having played this to a certain point for 43 times. but for the longest time in this webtoon, she felt like she thinks shes untouchable, not in danger, and disconnected from the 'game' consequences. her not having any thought about why the organisation who sent 'lynne dawechester' is evil is also bamboozling as hell. cause wym she couldnt suspect the 'lets groom children in an isolated dimension so they can die for the worlds later' people arent twisted in the slightest??? even if its all just a game, even if its not even a VR experience, the fact alone wouldve raised so many red flags. but she didnt even think of questioning the moral of her org until chapter 81, even though shes been busy running around being suspicious of everyone else. shes quick w everything else but the biggest foreshadowing issue right under her nose.
anyway its just a little bit from the story that i find frustrating a bit, but otherwise a solid and engaging story!!!!
the earlier chapters are off in translation but i got by so its fine.
i love that theres sooo many intrigues. it starts off pretty typically for an isekai, and i thought the problems was just going to be as typical but its actually pretty complex.
one problem that i have is that MC pretty much has very little if none of the sense of danger/urgency. i get that she really thought this was a game, and she got ahead by having played this to a certain point for 43 times. but for the longest time in this webtoon, she felt like she thinks shes untouchable, not in danger, and disconnected from the 'game' consequences. her not having any thought about why the organisation who sent 'lynne dawechester' is evil is also bamboozling as hell. cause wym she couldnt suspect the 'lets groom children in an isolated dimension so they can die for the worlds later' people arent twisted in the slightest??? even if its all just a game, even if its not even a VR experience, the fact alone wouldve raised so many red flags. but she didnt even think of questioning the moral of her org until chapter 81, even though shes been busy running around being suspicious of everyone else. shes quick w everything else but the biggest foreshadowing issue right under her nose.
anyway its just a little bit from the story that i find frustrating a bit, but otherwise a solid and engaging story!!!!