Just goon bro
If I’m meant to just goon, it shouldn’t be porn with plot
Think of it like something off p0rnhub. Its basically the same
SO I WASN'T THE ONLY ONE THAT NOTICED THAT XD
I mean- Yah it is meant to be just a smut and the plot was supposed to be mid at best- sounded like a wattpad fanfic at first and stuck to it
But the sudden change also throwed me off a bit since I like to understand the plot and I didnt read the smut tag at first... it just felt weird how everything went from 8 to 80 so suddenly xD
We dont talk -> He was a thug and i dont like that -> get cheated on -> sex with said thug -> minor plot -> sex -> repeat -> sudden plot change bc why not -> sex -> dating
But hey, its not meant to be read for the plot since its a smut with pretty art! People defendin this are clearly the target audience :D
As the other dude said, its goon material
I know lmao. Like I get that it’s gooner shit but can we at least keep the sliver of a plot consistent? Threw me off so bad because the new plot isn’t even good like it’s so badly cliche. They should’ve just stuck to the sex and forgot about the past entirely.
I know this story is more about the porn that anything else but the way the author lost the miniscule plot in less than 20 chapters is crazy. The early chapters show us that Seoha stopped talking to Dohyeon first after catching him with another female student on his lap. It definitely pushes this idea that she’s some purist prude and cut him off for messing around with girls. Which is whatever, I don’t really care. But now chapter 18 has him sleeping with an ultra sexy adult tutor that his super conservative and abusive dad hired? First of all, it’s so dumb that this is a tutor his dad hired because he literally keeps beating the shit out of Dohyeon for “straying off the path”. And now you’re telling me that Seoha didn’t stop talking to him, didn’t resent him for messing around with his tutor, and even took a golf club to the stomach for him??? He started avoiding her first now? Dohyeon literally says in like chapter 4 that he’s not the one that cut her off and he still felt the same as when they were kids. This change in the story is SO FUCKING DUMB because he literally approaches her first and it’s implied that he’s been longing to reconnect but didn’t know how because Seoha cut him off!!