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Cause it started out good. Then went downhill in the middle. I rated this highly at first as well and then the top just became so useless and the plot melodramatic for no reason. I like dominant bottoms and they're so rare to find, it's disappointing that this ended up the way it did. I think the couple suffered from a severe power imbalance, common sense from the top and contrived miscommunications.
I'm sorry, but I don't understand why it has such a high rating.
I read the whole story. In my opinion, it's an empty story, just sex, the uke is bossy and the seme is useless. I've never read about such a useless seme who contributed absolutely nothing to the story. Read at your own risk :)