the dialogue is SO FUNNY and that’s not common these days, plus they are hella cute so no dealbreakers for the couple. I do think the story writing could use some work, but it doesn’t ruin the story or anything, just makes you think why did the author even put that there… like the whole tutor plot, he didn’t end up doing anything with the GED, so what was the point of the entire thing… almost seems like the author just wanted another let’s go save him scene… I hated the tutor the entire time but for the cute main couple scenes we got out of it, I won’t complain haha. Some people are too critical I feel, the story has adorable scenes, good steamy scenes, and the art is good, so I enjoyed it a lot. I mean yeah I don’t really get the whole Illishine thing, like I know what it is, but I feel like they should’ve went deeper into that explanation/context. Like we know the effect isn’t real so what is an Illishine really? Who knows, and I don’t really care that much so I guess it’s ok lol- can’t wait to see the babies!!! ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ
the dialogue is SO FUNNY and that’s not common these days, plus they are hella cute so no dealbreakers for the couple. I do think the story writing could use some work, but it doesn’t ruin the story or anything, just makes you think why did the author even put that there… like the whole tutor plot, he didn’t end up doing anything with the GED, so what was the point of the entire thing… almost seems like the author just wanted another let’s go save him scene… I hated the tutor the entire time but for the cute main couple scenes we got out of it, I won’t complain haha. Some people are too critical I feel, the story has adorable scenes, good steamy scenes, and the art is good, so I enjoyed it a lot. I mean yeah I don’t really get the whole Illishine thing, like I know what it is, but I feel like they should’ve went deeper into that explanation/context. Like we know the effect isn’t real so what is an Illishine really? Who knows, and I don’t really care that much so I guess it’s ok lol- can’t wait to see the babies!!! ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ