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You’re so real for this, it all felt kinda underwhelming. I didn’t even feel just angst from this chapter either </3
Dead ass
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You’re so real for this, it all felt kinda underwhelming. I didn’t even feel just angst from this chapter either </3
Dead ass
Maybe I need to read in one go but all that build-up to have this chapter felt like it missed the mark.
Like do you get what I mean? It's so "oh ok." for me. Was that really the tipping point for you? That's it? Not like the other things you did or Dan did that were pretty major THE WHOLE STORY?
Yes, it's angst. Yes, it was about time. And yes, it's like an "now it all comes together" moment.
But it feels so flat