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You put it very well.
I truly think this had potential but was slapped together too sloppily *sigh*
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You put it very well.
I truly think this had potential but was slapped together too sloppily *sigh*
Overall I really like the art, characters and world building a lot. The story had a good flow and the chemistry between the main characters was really nice but then the last 5 chapters really dropped the ball for me.
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Too much happens too fast and the betrayal/pseudo incest/ SA/ drug chapters was just so incredibly unnecessary and had no build up besides wind dude liked the guy, randomly goes crazy and somehow (???) was in cahoots with the bad guy? Idk with more build up it might have been something but for me it really destroyed the ending.