Yeah... No. Story was mid. Characters were all over the place and there was a lot uncertainty with their dialogues and everything. It felt too messy for me to read, kinda rushed towards the end after Ren and Allen's supposed "make-up" scene. There are some stories out there with better composition than this one. Feels hollow. Lacks depth.
Yeah... No. Story was mid. Characters were all over the place and there was a lot uncertainty with their dialogues and everything. It felt too messy for me to read, kinda rushed towards the end after Ren and Allen's supposed "make-up" scene. There are some stories out there with better composition than this one. Feels hollow. Lacks depth.