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.....speechless

Cherished_onyx January 25, 2026 1:40 pm

The pacing was Horrible. I got whiplash trying to feel any emotion before the seme's lust was activated. The characters seem cute?not given enough time to bring depth to the characters. It's smut with a hint of storyline. Thankfully I read the comment about the Dubious "consent" prior to reading so I was mentally prepared.

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    Death_Stalks_Me March 10, 2026 3:28 am

    Totally agree! Like his son ran away and the dad is distraught and then suddenly they’re banging??

    I really wish the storyline went slower, it had such a great chance to be cute and deep but it missed it