foundation is good, the way story are told is very meh.
the only, true emotion i’ve seen on this are the lust when any sex happening.
mc - panic attack at the slight mention of dad. eventually met up and look fine in no time. redhead - slight ass, care more about mc hole than other damage he causes (mentally too), lacking too many emotion except for sex, acting too much like an annoying teenager you would want to punch anytime everytime. lanlord - the only acceptable -idc- attitude as a chaebol, but weird as hell he can just brush away the scene of those two he witness (it is very much weird witnessing the event of someone having sex with your own eyes.) mc dad - just straight up asshole, not apologetic, no shame brrrrruh redhead mom - creep me a bit at the fact he want redhead to be a carbon copy of the late father, attitude is not mommying at all, weird. yellow head - idek the purpose of introducing him and making him the side character if its not to pair him with landlord.
ik its just me, but in conclusion, all i can say is that even the character isn’t dramatic enough. or maybe author is staying on the lane for the rom-com. and this story deserve the tag “sex is the plot” bcs the original plot aren’t truly emphasized.
but then again, who am i to judge, i’ve never finish the daydream storyline i made in my head and can’t even draw a good stickman. thanks for reading my vent past this point. i hope someone could have an interesting argument with my point.
foundation is good, the way story are told is very meh.
the only, true emotion i’ve seen on this are the lust when any sex happening.
mc - panic attack at the slight mention of dad. eventually met up and look fine in no time.
redhead - slight ass, care more about mc hole than other damage he causes (mentally too), lacking too many emotion except for sex, acting too much like an annoying teenager you would want to punch anytime everytime.
lanlord - the only acceptable -idc- attitude as a chaebol, but weird as hell he can just brush away the scene of those two he witness (it is very much weird witnessing the event of someone having sex with your own eyes.)
mc dad - just straight up asshole, not apologetic, no shame brrrrruh
redhead mom - creep me a bit at the fact he want redhead to be a carbon copy of the late father, attitude is not mommying at all, weird.
yellow head - idek the purpose of introducing him and making him the side character if its not to pair him with landlord.
ik its just me, but in conclusion, all i can say is that even the character isn’t dramatic enough. or maybe author is staying on the lane for the rom-com. and this story deserve the tag “sex is the plot” bcs the original plot aren’t truly emphasized.
but then again, who am i to judge, i’ve never finish the daydream storyline i made in my head and can’t even draw a good stickman. thanks for reading my vent past this point. i hope someone could have an interesting argument with my point.