The story isn’t bad it’s just kind of naive? Is the best way I could put it the plot is kind of a mash of all Japanese shounen manga plot lines except the speed is 3 times faster plot wise.
It kind of feels like a cheap copy even though it’s “original”. Like the MC is very much a Gary stue, and it feels like the author is making solvable problems, like the strong guy getting possessed.
couldn’t they explain he was possessed why did they have to hide it because of the prophecies like they could’ve just said a strong rift monster was a parasite that took over his body they didn’t have to kill him off to the public like if they have alchemy magic and teleportation why wouldn’t the public be able to believe possession.
Also really wierd how the mom wasn’t relocated or at least protected after getting almost killed in the beginning. Like if they found out where he lived and poisoned the mother idk maybe common sense would make the characters believe that the current situation is extremely dangerous since the MC is the one vital danger to the clusters.
For heavens sake the clusters tried to blow up a planet since the mc was on it. Why wouldn’t they blow up the area the mom is or at least hold her hostage.
There’s other complaints but that would make this comment way longer and I don’t have the time.
Again the story isn’t bad it just feels very bland. No character depth or development. Problems that feel stupid, and solvable. And the fast pace story isn’t doing the plot favors. (Fast paced stories aren’t bad ex. Demon slayer is good it’s just this type of plot line shouldn’t have a fast pace.)
The plot has potential but the author is just bad at executing it. Like possessions by past heroes, a genius MC, dungeon type world, awakeners, apocalypse, towers, students. These aren’t bad plot lines they just feel like the author dipped his toes in each one and didn’t elaborate at all. Again it feels like a mash not really a story.
But to each their own, if you feel like story is perfect it’s perfect.
I just have a large complaint because it’s so close to being a good story but the author is just really bad.
The story isn’t bad it’s just kind of naive? Is the best way I could put it the plot is kind of a mash of all Japanese shounen manga plot lines except the speed is 3 times faster plot wise.
It kind of feels like a cheap copy even though it’s “original”. Like the MC is very much a Gary stue, and it feels like the author is making solvable problems, like the strong guy getting possessed.
couldn’t they explain he was possessed why did they have to hide it because of the prophecies like they could’ve just said a strong rift monster was a parasite that took over his body they didn’t have to kill him off to the public like if they have alchemy magic and teleportation why wouldn’t the public be able to believe possession.
Also really wierd how the mom wasn’t relocated or at least protected after getting almost killed in the beginning. Like if they found out where he lived and poisoned the mother idk maybe common sense would make the characters believe that the current situation is extremely dangerous since the MC is the one vital danger to the clusters.
For heavens sake the clusters tried to blow up a planet since the mc was on it. Why wouldn’t they blow up the area the mom is or at least hold her hostage.
There’s other complaints but that would make this comment way longer and I don’t have the time.
Again the story isn’t bad it just feels very bland. No character depth or development. Problems that feel stupid, and solvable. And the fast pace story isn’t doing the plot favors. (Fast paced stories aren’t bad ex. Demon slayer is good it’s just this type of plot line shouldn’t have a fast pace.)
The plot has potential but the author is just bad at executing it. Like possessions by past heroes, a genius MC, dungeon type world, awakeners, apocalypse, towers, students. These aren’t bad plot lines they just feel like the author dipped his toes in each one and didn’t elaborate at all. Again it feels like a mash not really a story.
But to each their own, if you feel like story is perfect it’s perfect.
I just have a large complaint because it’s so close to being a good story but the author is just really bad.