To My Beloved Master

This story had potential but ruined it with assault for no reason. The art is great and the small details in the story are lovely. I liked the flashbacks of their childhood the most because the memories were sweet. I understand living on the streets and becoming an assassin will mentally mess you up but from what it seemed like…..Nigel went crazy because Lucien was sleeping around and he felt like nothing. I do believe Nigel killing Lucien wasn’t really personal since it was his job and he had the opportunity to make Lucien his.

A better plot: The uncle should’ve been the one to catch them kissing when they were younger to use the love for another later on. I also feel Nigel should’ve had to run away for a different reason but still became an assassin. The uncle could’ve still hire an assassin from a group but not know Nigel would be pick. When Nigel is picked for the job, he doesn’t know that he has to assassinate Lucien until the moment it happens. Nigel’s feelings spark up and he chooses to save Lucien. Then the rest of the story is them on the run because the uncle hired more assassins to kill them both because he found out Nigel saved Lucien. Being hunted down caused them to be closer and other mushy stuff. The end is when the uncle tries to kill Lucien himself but obviously Nigel saves Lucien and kills the uncle but gets hurt in the process. He heals and they live happily ever after……idk maybe open a dance studio ╮(￣▽￣)╭

Hell they could’ve made Nigel into a nobleman instead of an assassin as well ┑(￣Д ￣)┍