Been awhile since I read and decided catch up and honestly everything is quite anticlimactic. It feels like the gang situation was not even necessary anymore and just took away too much time from actual development for the characters and im not liking that the ones who took part of violence are getting an easy way out while others, like Toby miscarriage, are the one's taking the hit (consequences?). Also noticed the chapters are quite short with unnecessary amount of cliffhangers which I would say take aways the excitement when you have wait 10 days.
The only good thing I see are some symbolisms and foils of each ml when with Ian, the MC. Oh and how fate collides between each character, one feels natural because they follow their instinct while the other feels artificial, forced upon with only one guiding (controlling) it
Been awhile since I read and decided catch up and honestly everything is quite anticlimactic. It feels like the gang situation was not even necessary anymore and just took away too much time from actual development for the characters and im not liking that the ones who took part of violence are getting an easy way out while others, like Toby miscarriage, are the one's taking the hit (consequences?). Also noticed the chapters are quite short with unnecessary amount of cliffhangers which I would say take aways the excitement when you have wait 10 days.
The only good thing I see are some symbolisms and foils of each ml when with Ian, the MC. Oh and how fate collides between each character, one feels natural because they follow their instinct while the other feels artificial, forced upon with only one guiding (controlling) it