Responses
If I had a dollar for every story I passed up because of what someone else said, I'd actually be able to buy all of these stories. If I got another dollar by leaving a message on every single story I passed up, I could just hire some people to act the stories out for me. Too bad I get nothing, except the pleasure I had reading this story. Which looks like her wishes are gonna come true, and there will be some payback time!!
Just by its description, it already sounds messy and downright bad. Not reading this one after reading the comments.