First parts were actually okay. When they were actually having conversations and banter. Then it just devolved into them just getting it on without even properly explaining to the readers HOW and WHY they were falling for each other. Seggs scenes weren't even all that good tbh. 5/10 had potential but fell flat
First parts were actually okay. When they were actually having conversations and banter. Then it just devolved into them just getting it on without even properly explaining to the readers HOW and WHY they were falling for each other. Seggs scenes weren't even all that good tbh. 5/10 had potential but fell flat