girl why are we so much alike? I've read this years ago and now I'm about to enter college in just a few months. I did love this story when it was still ongoing. I dropped it because of busy student life and now that I have the time again to read manhwas and I remember this as one of my list. It even took me a week to find it again and I just found it hours ago.
And all this time? I'm cringing so bad.
I don't know if it's because I've read a same plot on wattpad (went to the story and need to be killed in order to go back to their real world) that it made me bored but I think the plot's not the case, it's the scenes and dialogues. Kind of rushed and a bit cheesy.
Well, the plot's kinda good though. You barely find a bl manhwa with a plot like this. It's just that I also find it cringe.
So for me, it's a 50/50.
Btw, I find it awesome to hear wattpad here then I suddenly noticed your name. I understand where you're coming from immediately, atecco hahaha :)
Right? I'm glad you get me. The plot is okay but the execution flopped it. It's fine if a story is cliche, but c'mon, write it better. I've seen lots of good ones, even with the typical isekai trope, the author managed to write it off good without making it too cringe. The characters here were written two-dimensionally, so it felt like there was no depth in whatsoever in this narrative. And their fuckass dialogues are so cheesy (and wdym you brought a dangerous stranger into your house just cuz you knew he was the ml? Hell nah, I'll just call 911 and call it a day bruh.)
Why can't MCs understand that the moment they involved themselves and change the storyline, especially the way they change their interaction with the characters involved, is the moment everything will go awry and stray from the original plot. Fucking dumbass MCs. Realizing it too late is a sign of low intelligence
I liked this when I was still in my high school (it still had few chaps), but now that I reread this when I'm in college... Damn it's so fucking cringe ah! Especially that "crazy top" . Omyghad they're all adults but they don't act like one (I dunno but hyeonjin is so normal that he seems out of place). This remind s me of those mafia Wattpad BLs I read back then (I want my memories erased, why did I even like them( ；∀；))
I can't believe I patiently waited for this to update when it was still starting.