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+ jst wanna add that Theon is wasted on her lol idk why bro switched up that fast or why she even helped him if she has 0 ambitions
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+ jst wanna add that Theon is wasted on her lol idk why bro switched up that fast or why she even helped him if she has 0 ambitions
The pacing feels off idk tbh I wish I would've seen more internal conflict in the FL it feels like shes jst getting along all happy go lucky with her opps with zero thoughts behind em big ol eyes?? Why are you saving these people?? It'd be one thing if she wanted to take over and beat her sister to survive or if she was trying to be a bootlicker to her sister to survive but all she wants is to run away so like ????? What's the point??