Thank you. Listen people just wanna talk cause they can
Hey readers can put a critique or two, they can talk since they're as reader too. You shouldn't expect that every read would love this or don't talk about the “cleanliness” because again, they're a reader. Some of them won't drop it because they're hoping for something new to happen. Thank you
TLDR: not every story is for you.
i’ve started stories that weren’t tagged properly that i really enjoyed but halfway through a theme was thrown in that i do not like, i didn’t wait for it to resolve i dropped it because it wasn’t for me anymore.
yes you (a reader) can critique the work, but it’s also on you (as a reader) to know what you are reading (to a certain degree). This is a mafia story that has romance, let’s keep that in mind, and this is a set storyline- if something is going to change its only going to “cause drama” and not hope for sunshine and rainbows.
what more do you want from this? we all knew this was going to be mafia porn from the beginning so why are you complaining about: the dirty sex? the blood? her body proportions? his behavior?
we all knew this was going to be toxic. read or drop