this chapter really just did a 180 on his character TOO much in my opinion like my heart sank when he started sucking it. It’s as if author just decided to paint him as the obnoxious asshole in this one I am so confused. He’s just a baby who wants to participate and win a competition ☹
Yeah, him and sucking him felt like forever, it was obvious that it won't work and he's making everything worse. And like we know he really doesn't wanna do it, so it all was just humiliating and demeaning for both of them. And don't get whyyyyyy
Everything was going so well, writing wise I mean
It was difficult situation for both, they were tangled up with love, guilt, anger, resentment, yet not being able to move on. We could sympathise with both and they both very human, like very well written characters.
Was it going in a too predictable 'docile' way?
Feels sorta like it was for a shock value, to make it feel more dramatic
Hope it does another 180 again not them, but the writing, they defo needed conflict and distance
IT JUST FEELS SO RUSHED like this was not what i expected from this chapter i agree on everything you said
it’s so refreshing to see someone who has reading comprehension and is actually invested in character development thank you for the comment literally water to my quenched self
Is it just me but it was kinda... Not really making sense?
Su-ah was helping the whole time, happily too
Why suddenly get so desperate? There were no reason too
Not desperate about competition and his 'last chance' but about getting the cum
There was no inclination that Su-ah would refuse and go extra mile if needed
The mistake was obvious, anyone could tell this sudden shift in behaviour would give him wrong idea
Also he was going at him with demanding attitude cause he felt wronged, why he suddenly stepped back from it?
Like it's almost a scene was missing where he'd get a reason to feel uncertain, like smth that would make him think Su-ah got fed up
Am I bugging? Was there anything
So this extra long sequence of him so desperately trying to get him hard after acting pretty much repulsed by Su-ah and idea of sex with him feels forced and disgusting
I feel that's doing character dirty
I think it was fair for him to have a grudge and push Su-ah away, now it's like he's exploitative asshole first and foremost