it was definitely good, but really confusing lmao. idk what was happening and the chapters literally felt disjointed?? i kept thinking i had missed a page or chapter because of how off the flow of the story was.
i liked the concept, but i think it could have been executed better. the story telling and dialogue just wasn’t the most cohesive and consistent, to the point where you don’t really know what’s happening. even the transitions between scenes are confusing, with the characters suddenly switching settings with no proper transition into it. i think it’s partly the translation, but it’s probably mostly the author’s style, as apparently their other works are like that too. i did read the stalker one but kinda forgot what it was about so i’m trusting the comments on that lmao. it was also pretty crazy how they JUST met in class and then immediately had sex. what happened to hello? how are you? idk that just felt off to me, but i get that it was kinda the premise.
the art was amazing though, i love how the bodies were drawn, and the expressions were so on point!! the sex scenes were also incredible, so sensual and erotic. their reactions during sex were SO well captured, like i love how you can really tell just from looking at them they’re feeling good. love me an expressive and reactive uke especially.
kei is mf so handsome, but ngl masafumi did look kinda chopped in a lot of the panels. i liked the look of the uke in their stalker manga much better, idk something about masafumi’s facial features just looked off sometimes? his expressions were ON POINT during the sex scenes though. oh yeah, ngl, kei and masafumi look really fuckin similar (bc their hair style is basically the same) sometimes, so it’s really hard to tell them apart.
wow i did NOT realise i had this much to say about this manga LMAO
it was definitely good, but really confusing lmao. idk what was happening and the chapters literally felt disjointed?? i kept thinking i had missed a page or chapter because of how off the flow of the story was.
i liked the concept, but i think it could have been executed better. the story telling and dialogue just wasn’t the most cohesive and consistent, to the point where you don’t really know what’s happening. even the transitions between scenes are confusing, with the characters suddenly switching settings with no proper transition into it. i think it’s partly the translation, but it’s probably mostly the author’s style, as apparently their other works are like that too. i did read the stalker one but kinda forgot what it was about so i’m trusting the comments on that lmao. it was also pretty crazy how they JUST met in class and then immediately had sex. what happened to hello? how are you? idk that just felt off to me, but i get that it was kinda the premise.
the art was amazing though, i love how the bodies were drawn, and the expressions were so on point!! the sex scenes were also incredible, so sensual and erotic. their reactions during sex were SO well captured, like i love how you can really tell just from looking at them they’re feeling good. love me an expressive and reactive uke especially.
kei is mf so handsome, but ngl masafumi did look kinda chopped in a lot of the panels. i liked the look of the uke in their stalker manga much better, idk something about masafumi’s facial features just looked off sometimes? his expressions were ON POINT during the sex scenes though. oh yeah, ngl, kei and masafumi look really fuckin similar (bc their hair style is basically the same) sometimes, so it’s really hard to tell them apart.
wow i did NOT realise i had this much to say about this manga LMAO