Major major deep spoilers, But SAVE YOURSELF THE READ!!!
Let me tell you. I have no issues with slop. I love slop. This was BAD. Let's start of with Yanniels(?) We'll just say Miss Yan. WHAT HAPPENED??? Why didn't she fall in love with Philip? Or at the very least have feelings for him? It seemed like from the beginning she had no interest in him at all, and sure after he became weird she probably had 0 interest, but what exactly was the catalyst for that?? We weren't given a reason as to WHY she didn't feel anything towards the crown prince. Secondly, I want to call this found family, but I can't. Not in good faith. We really don't get any more family after a certain point, and she's (Selina???) with Louis like 99% of the time after, we barely get any real Croft family heart to heart. I feel like we were robbed of some really genuine moments. Also, the ending seemed rushed and confusing. Which leads me to our hateful crown prince.
WHAT, WAS. THAT. Even if Philip didn't like the magic tower and therefore Louis because it undermined the imperial family, WHY DIDNT HIS FATHER feel the same way?? The current emperor is not only healthy, but seems to be in decent terms. Did he think his father was a pushover? And where did he even get the idea that, I don't know, signing a peace treaty wasn't the best/ideal move? Also, neither succeeded in summoning a demon. That's to anticlimactic. There was no threat at all except for the mini crown princess test. There was literally no angst at all. So was the mother, empress, corrupt? Also, why did he even have a rotten personality anyway? It doesn't seem like the emperor is like that, so maybe it was his mom. Also after being rejected by Miss Yan, did he really go off into the deep end? This was so stupid. Don't even waste your time reading it.
Honestly, I got bored of reading it, and decided to stick until the end to at least complete it. It's really a 1.8/5. I do NOT recommend, not even as a boredom read. It's just trash
Major major deep spoilers, But SAVE YOURSELF THE READ!!!
Let me tell you. I have no issues with slop. I love slop. This was BAD. Let's start of with Yanniels(?) We'll just say Miss Yan. WHAT HAPPENED??? Why didn't she fall in love with Philip? Or at the very least have feelings for him? It seemed like from the beginning she had no interest in him at all, and sure after he became weird she probably had 0 interest, but what exactly was the catalyst for that?? We weren't given a reason as to WHY she didn't feel anything towards the crown prince. Secondly, I want to call this found family, but I can't. Not in good faith. We really don't get any more family after a certain point, and she's (Selina???) with Louis like 99% of the time after, we barely get any real Croft family heart to heart. I feel like we were robbed of some really genuine moments. Also, the ending seemed rushed and confusing. Which leads me to our hateful crown prince.
WHAT, WAS. THAT. Even if Philip didn't like the magic tower and therefore Louis because it undermined the imperial family, WHY DIDNT HIS FATHER feel the same way?? The current emperor is not only healthy, but seems to be in decent terms. Did he think his father was a pushover? And where did he even get the idea that, I don't know, signing a peace treaty wasn't the best/ideal move? Also, neither succeeded in summoning a demon. That's to anticlimactic. There was no threat at all except for the mini crown princess test. There was literally no angst at all. So was the mother, empress, corrupt? Also, why did he even have a rotten personality anyway? It doesn't seem like the emperor is like that, so maybe it was his mom. Also after being rejected by Miss Yan, did he really go off into the deep end? This was so stupid. Don't even waste your time reading it.
Honestly, I got bored of reading it, and decided to stick until the end to at least complete it. It's really a 1.8/5. I do NOT recommend, not even as a boredom read. It's just trash