Responses
I think it's flashing back and forth between Mariella making the potions and what those potions are being used for in the labyrinth. It's like watching a show that switches back and forth between an A plot, B plot, and occasional C plot.
The story flow and pacing is kinda confusing.
Is it the same as the original raw? This feels like.. a collage of scenes. Things happened in one page and on the next page it is a completely different scene.