I have to say it's a cute story and kinda rare trope so it's a plus but the lines are lacking sadly (it's not about translation). May some see this as a good constructive criticism (maybe yr making ur own webttom or comics). As for the reader the lines are lacking in the real convo part, it kinda feels like there are unsaid things the characters were meant to say but they already now like they be doing mind reading. Also there's not much diversity in between characters way of speaking or texting one another. The art is ok I hope the artist will get better on their next work (I am artist as well). Anyway if the writing improved I would be more into this one but it's still a rly cute story. I LOVE THE GAP MOE (▰˘◡˘▰)
Wish all the best for the authors of this one (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
I have to say it's a cute story and kinda rare trope so it's a plus but the lines are lacking sadly (it's not about translation). May some see this as a good constructive criticism (maybe yr making ur own webttom or comics). As for the reader the lines are lacking in the real convo part, it kinda feels like there are unsaid things the characters were meant to say but they already now like they be doing mind reading. Also there's not much diversity in between characters way of speaking or texting one another. The art is ok I hope the artist will get better on their next work (I am artist as well).
Anyway if the writing improved I would be more into this one but it's still a rly cute story. I LOVE THE GAP MOE (▰˘◡˘▰)
Wish all the best for the authors of this one (๑•ㅂ•)و✧