I really tried my best to keep reading this story but ultimately I just dropped it. I don't know if its because of the way the chapters were uploaded or if it was the story itself but a lot of the story felt like it was skipping the important parts. Some of the scenes felt like they came out of no where especially after chapter 80. Especially the weird skips between chapter 90, to 94. I know that it would've been easy to continue but I really didn't want to fill in the blanks myself. You don't even really get to see a lot of the escalation with Veronica's character or how or why she's involved with Emma's death. It comes out of nowhere and there was no information in the story before hand that supported the fact they knew each other. Also the conversation that Selene had with Veronica skips a lot too and doesn't make sense. 3/10 Overall
I really tried my best to keep reading this story but ultimately I just dropped it. I don't know if its because of the way the chapters were uploaded or if it was the story itself but a lot of the story felt like it was skipping the important parts. Some of the scenes felt like they came out of no where especially after chapter 80. Especially the weird skips between chapter 90, to 94. I know that it would've been easy to continue but I really didn't want to fill in the blanks myself. You don't even really get to see a lot of the escalation with Veronica's character or how or why she's involved with Emma's death. It comes out of nowhere and there was no information in the story before hand that supported the fact they knew each other. Also the conversation that Selene had with Veronica skips a lot too and doesn't make sense. 3/10 Overall