story ended on a weak point for me in the last chaps cuz of that ship. imo if author rlly wanted the couple the last few chaps were totally not needed n us readers seeing them hitched at the end woulda worked. why? cuz thats how little chemistry they had anyway lmao the "extra" chap did not build that AT ALL
him realizing 'oh i dont think of her as little sis actually' or 'oh im so worried abt her actually' was speedrun in less than a few panels LOL woulda work if he did that scattered thru out but nah he "idgaf bout her actually" then 180-ed last min LOL
stick with the orig plot author his MOM had a better romance than him
story ended on a weak point for me in the last chaps cuz of that ship. imo if author rlly wanted the couple the last few chaps were totally not needed n us readers seeing them hitched at the end woulda worked. why? cuz thats how little chemistry they had anyway lmao the "extra" chap did not build that AT ALL
him realizing 'oh i dont think of her as little sis actually' or 'oh im so worried abt her actually' was speedrun in less than a few panels LOL woulda work if he did that scattered thru out but nah he "idgaf bout her actually" then 180-ed last min LOL
stick with the orig plot author his MOM had a better romance than him