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Not bad

John Smith February 23, 2026 1:13 pm

Story is like a 7/10, nothing too crazy but still enjoyable
two of his kids lowkey have the same background story so I find it to be a bit lazy
lore and world building is interesting
power scaling is a little stupid and doesn’t make much sense, they’re kind of adding too much all at once.
A little too much “tell” and needs more “show”

All in all, a decent read. I probably won’t keep up with the series until it’s finished

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