Everything else is fine, but the story feels a bit off. Also, why did her father kill her siblings? And what about her mother’s backstory what family did she come from, and why did her maternal family completely cut off contact with their only grandchild?
Everything else is fine, but the story feels a bit off. Also, why did her father kill her siblings? And what about her mother’s backstory what family did she come from, and why did her maternal family completely cut off contact with their only grandchild?