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finished rereading this piece (long comment ahead!)

hellnaww February 27, 2026 4:09 pm

finished rereading this piece thinking it was the peak, but then i realized, fuck its just had so many weakpoints. the lack of introduction to magic (like i also thought that there weren't supernatural shit, just like another op said) and the templar knights (i couldn't differentiate whether they were the villains or not), the fact that MC is fucking weak as hell that i began to think it was ironic for him to even be a sniper without a proper self defense training and that he was avoidant (tho it's good for him to have redeemed himself in the end, ML is too focused on his peenar that it's the only thing he could defend on the question of MC's love and trust for him, and ML'S MOM! man i wanted to learn a bit of backstory on her cuz i love these women too much. Also, i kinda questioned esper's behaviour towards MC hehe, wished that we also learned a bit from him and not just an introduced rando colleague in the story. not a fan of this work anymore, i was just here cuz of nostalgia. BTW there's too much sex in it that I doubt if it's the only thing they do, SINCE I am more of a fluff person. ^^ yeh sorry for the long rant.

Responses
    Kuro_Neko March 11, 2026 9:56 pm

    Girl same. Rereading this now the shortcomings are so obvious

    evelyon March 20, 2026 4:06 pm

    help i just came to reread for the same nostalgia thing but now i'm rethinking it t.t
    guess im gonna reread something else and keep it good in my memories lol

    Byygvy June 8, 2026 2:17 pm

    I remember this being peak and was gonna reread it but now idk cuz u probably right