honestly the concept is really good. A person who cant move on from their deceased lover and him coming back to comfort and motivate him to move forward in life, to not linger and waste his life in grief, before leaving. Its a good plot for such a short story like this. But rlly.... as much as I recognise that this is yaoi, there is too much smut. Its literally like 60% of the story ngl. I read through this in 10 minutes because i skipped all the sex and just read the plot. I think like every chapter except the first and the last had smut man its ridiculous. Within that 60% of the manhwa they couldve drawn in more scenes to further showcase how the mc couldnt bear to leave the dead ml and maybe a moment specially for the mc to realise he needs to move on and get over his dead bf but its instead all just sex. Its lowk such a waste of a plot.
This shouldve been a shounen ai. I'm not saying it cant be a yaoi, but for this type of story its best to be minimal with how much sex u draw in....
honestly the concept is really good. A person who cant move on from their deceased lover and him coming back to comfort and motivate him to move forward in life, to not linger and waste his life in grief, before leaving. Its a good plot for such a short story like this. But rlly.... as much as I recognise that this is yaoi, there is too much smut. Its literally like 60% of the story ngl. I read through this in 10 minutes because i skipped all the sex and just read the plot. I think like every chapter except the first and the last had smut man its ridiculous. Within that 60% of the manhwa they couldve drawn in more scenes to further showcase how the mc couldnt bear to leave the dead ml and maybe a moment specially for the mc to realise he needs to move on and get over his dead bf but its instead all just sex. Its lowk such a waste of a plot.
This shouldve been a shounen ai. I'm not saying it cant be a yaoi, but for this type of story its best to be minimal with how much sex u draw in....