i totally get you, i also thought i won't get over it, i went crazy in my room
thats the purpose to make the reader uncomfortable
not everything that makes u uncomfortable is poorly written IJBOLLL
Yeah I know that? Its not poorly written BECAUSE im uncomfortable, its poorly written AND im uncomfortable.
Yeah but that doesn't change the fact that it was poorly handled. Theres better ways to write angst and make the reader feel strong emotions without doing whatever bs they got going on
poorly handled!??! LMFAO just say ure too young and move on
character doing something awful =/= poorly written
a lot of good character writing comes from mistakes and guilt. the whole story literally revolved around him realizing what he did n trying to deal with it n apologize for it DUH
newgen asf
Young?? Newgen!?!? Im neither of those things, which is why im saying this sucks dude I have literally read it done better so many times over the years in many different stories, thats why this one frustrates me!! They could've done so much with it, it really started off good (╬￣皿￣)
Obviously a character doing something shitty isnt poor writing
It was going so good.. I was really enjoying the story, but then Luan had Clauden beaten??? Like that genuinely ruined the entire thing for me. The whole thing was handled really weirdly and was unnecessary imo. Idm angst, but that was just poorly written and uncomfortable #－.－)