It would have been a wonderful story, the pacing was just all over the place. I think it would have been perfect if it ran a couple more chapters. I agree 34 chaps isnt enough to relay the story with a better flow. But i still liked the plot all in all. Just unfortunate it was paced like this.
It would have been a wonderful story, the pacing was just all over the place. I think it would have been perfect if it ran a couple more chapters. I agree 34 chaps isnt enough to relay the story with a better flow. But i still liked the plot all in all. Just unfortunate it was paced like this.