First this story was rushed ASF. The concept was good, blending hints of scent/omegaverse into s guideverse story is a subgenre I really enjoy. HOWEVER, this story just left so many holes in it.
First, the guild entirely too hot and they need their own stories. I'm looking at you Flat, Cverny, and the other long haired member. Also speaking of that member, it looks like he suffers from DID??? that at just completely glossed over and not addressed at all.
Then the reasoning behind Cverny banned was absolutely ass because the mated GUIDE approached him, not the other way around and did he actually lose the battle or not.
Coda, i loved him from the start and I'll continue to love him. I felt so sorry that he lost his lover Ano. Hopefully he can fall in love with the NSA commander. I ship it. Just like I ship Flat x Cverny and the other guide x the other long haired esper with DID.
I still don't understand hyoseop backstop either. So was he 15 and bonded with a grown ass man??? And they wanted him to perform oral on him??? I feel like they glossed over the fact that he was sexually assaulted and focused more on the fact that an esper died. Bro was a trafficked victim. Cuz apparently they kept in isolation and He couldn't see the sun??? Like they glossed over so much of his trauma and only focused on DANTE fine ass.
I love DANTE back story a lot. It's very tragic and I feel bad for him losing his brother and knowing a monster been inside his brother body and defiling it. I would've went crazy at the thought that even in death, my love one was still being violated. So I understand him, love him down.
Hyoseop story should've been more.
Coda love story should have gotten a chapter or two as well. But yeah, I'll give this story a 5.5/10.
First this story was rushed ASF. The concept was good, blending hints of scent/omegaverse into s guideverse story is a subgenre I really enjoy. HOWEVER, this story just left so many holes in it.
First, the guild entirely too hot and they need their own stories. I'm looking at you Flat, Cverny, and the other long haired member. Also speaking of that member, it looks like he suffers from DID??? that at just completely glossed over and not addressed at all.
Then the reasoning behind Cverny banned was absolutely ass because the mated GUIDE approached him, not the other way around and did he actually lose the battle or not.
Coda, i loved him from the start and I'll continue to love him. I felt so sorry that he lost his lover Ano. Hopefully he can fall in love with the NSA commander. I ship it. Just like I ship Flat x Cverny and the other guide x the other long haired esper with DID.
I still don't understand hyoseop backstop either. So was he 15 and bonded with a grown ass man??? And they wanted him to perform oral on him??? I feel like they glossed over the fact that he was sexually assaulted and focused more on the fact that an esper died. Bro was a trafficked victim. Cuz apparently they kept in isolation and
He couldn't see the sun??? Like they glossed over so much of his trauma and only focused on DANTE fine ass.
I love DANTE back story a lot. It's very tragic and I feel bad for him losing his brother and knowing a monster been inside his brother body and defiling it. I would've went crazy at the thought that even in death, my love one was still being violated. So I understand him, love him down.
Hyoseop story should've been more.
Coda love story should have gotten a chapter or two as well. But yeah, I'll give this story a 5.5/10.