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Yeah, prime example of a story getting lost in the sauce because authors wanted to drag it out. Story sucks now…
yeah agreed the story sucks
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Yeah, prime example of a story getting lost in the sauce because authors wanted to drag it out. Story sucks now…
yeah agreed the story sucks
At first, I was trying to understand the plot, but now, what even is the plot? I skipped so many chapters, and what's with the flashbacks so many times?
The story is ass
The conversation is ass
The Mc is ass
The plot isn't plotting(lol). You might think, "Oh, here we go," but no, the story just flops. I'm so pained; how can a story with such potential end up like this?
The worst part is she's supposed to be a queen, but they only talk about it during the fight. It's not even the center of attention. Like she's a queen but somehow lacks critical thinking? The lack of logic is concerning, not martial arts logic or regression logic, no, I'm talking about common sense. Nah, it had so much potential, to be honest. It's such a good story, but what happened?!