I just think there was no explanation behind Yuma and no proper resolve for the war thing. I love the characters, their growth, and their dynamics, however, the main plot is kind of all over the place. I wish there were more chapters so that the manhwa was slower paced. And less smut scenes, absolutely loved them, but more scenes could have been given to lore and growth.
Criticism 1: Where did Yuma come from?? I know the obvious answer is South Korea, Earth, but it still doesn't explain his backstory. He briefly mentions it when he talks to the Goddess again, but we aren't given more context. We know (as of right now) that he doesn't have family, friends, or anyone who would care if he got transmigrated (which is a really redundant excuse writers use). I wish there was more nuance to it I guess. Like I want to see Yuma actually grieve his actual previous life.
Criticism 2: Why did the Goddess do all of that?? Yuma, in the story, is revealed to be all of the "outsiders" from previous times. The Goddess simply erases his memories from his previous trasmigrations when he gets in a new body. The only reason why in Sachel he remembers is because he went into a contract with Nine (a demon), which severed his connection to the Goddess, meaning he is less affected by her manipulation and can recall living as Sachel. We NEVER got this answered in the story. Not only did it make me feel unsatisfied, it made me even more confused! I get that the Goddess was simply a character to move the plot along but she's practically nonexistent and you forget about her 90% of ths time.
Criticism 3: The fact that they never properly resolved the "almost going into war with humans" thing?? They just kind of skip over it, the new king is too busy to declare war, the humans are too scared to fight demons, but you guys didn't try and solve it politically? I just find it hard that the LITERAL Demon King would have a bunch of freetime sparring and having sex with Yuma and not literally trying to come up with ways to resolve the conflict with the humans? And even if he wasn't concerned with the human kingdom, he would still not have time to be spending time with Yuma. He was a fucking kingdom to run! And they just got their food situation solved.
But, those are only my main gripes with this story.
I just think there was no explanation behind Yuma and no proper resolve for the war thing. I love the characters, their growth, and their dynamics, however, the main plot is kind of all over the place. I wish there were more chapters so that the manhwa was slower paced. And less smut scenes, absolutely loved them, but more scenes could have been given to lore and growth.
Criticism 1: Where did Yuma come from?? I know the obvious answer is South Korea, Earth, but it still doesn't explain his backstory. He briefly mentions it when he talks to the Goddess again, but we aren't given more context. We know (as of right now) that he doesn't have family, friends, or anyone who would care if he got transmigrated (which is a really redundant excuse writers use). I wish there was more nuance to it I guess. Like I want to see Yuma actually grieve his actual previous life.
Criticism 2: Why did the Goddess do all of that?? Yuma, in the story, is revealed to be all of the "outsiders" from previous times. The Goddess simply erases his memories from his previous trasmigrations when he gets in a new body. The only reason why in Sachel he remembers is because he went into a contract with Nine (a demon), which severed his connection to the Goddess, meaning he is less affected by her manipulation and can recall living as Sachel. We NEVER got this answered in the story. Not only did it make me feel unsatisfied, it made me even more confused! I get that the Goddess was simply a character to move the plot along but she's practically nonexistent and you forget about her 90% of ths time.
Criticism 3: The fact that they never properly resolved the "almost going into war with humans" thing?? They just kind of skip over it, the new king is too busy to declare war, the humans are too scared to fight demons, but you guys didn't try and solve it politically? I just find it hard that the LITERAL Demon King would have a bunch of freetime sparring and having sex with Yuma and not literally trying to come up with ways to resolve the conflict with the humans? And even if he wasn't concerned with the human kingdom, he would still not have time to be spending time with Yuma. He was a fucking kingdom to run! And they just got their food situation solved.
But, those are only my main gripes with this story.