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Confusing AF?

Sachiko March 5, 2026 8:19 am

Am I the only one who thought that the pacing was super fucking weird? Like, in order to understand it, you REALLY need to read it closely. Panels were not broken up properly, and there was lots of jumping around with no dialogue.

Like, you think you’re reading about them fucking, but then turns out three months passed by in the next frame.

Like??? I think the plot was sooo rushed . . . It’s too bad because it was still a good concept. But it almost felt like a storyboard . . . Instead of an actual book.

Definitely needed more like 55 chapters.

Responses
    S4en3 March 5, 2026 8:36 am

    I understand u bae, ur not the only one. But hey let's enjoy the artstyle

    ABees March 6, 2026 5:31 am

    No you're right. People give it a pass bc of the art & the story potential but it's kinda poorly written lol