Responses
it doesn't matter how long or short this thing is.
no matter the length, it will have the same problem by going down the same path.
you can write about how inevitable it is that the antagonist becomes the antagonist, but at least try not to make your story about, I don't know, goddamn CHANGING THE PAST?
what is the point of knowing the past, if you spend the entire time continuing your existence off of hate from another life?
what is the point of a revenge that has no witness except yourself?
and is there meaning to punish and lead someone to be punished based on events you already know?
to know someone's nature, only to let the continue down absolute insanity whilst attempting to posture as someone rightuous, is laughable.
the manhwa fails all three questions to pursue the most basic possible revenge plot with a serially neglected child who grew up to hate and hold suspicion with everything around him.