I dunno how to put it but its like you have a good concept draw good but then every single character is written one dimensionally. Like main boy, he's way co-dependent and thats explored well then there's ML whose purpose is only to love the main boy which is good for some people (me) ANd then there's everyone else who has a plot and is only that plot the whole time.
I dunno how to put it but its like you have a good concept draw good but then every single character is written one dimensionally. Like main boy, he's way co-dependent and thats explored well then there's ML whose purpose is only to love the main boy which is good for some people (me) ANd then there's everyone else who has a plot and is only that plot the whole time.