I wish the characters were more fleshed out, I know the author usually does “porn with a side plot” but cmon. What do we know about mc? That he had a dog? Okay… his personality? He just smiles and goes along with everything.. at least the ml has a personality that all other characters in the authors story which is being a pathetic, wimpy kid in a way who is good to the mc but is pretty rude to others. I wish the author just tried to actualise a story instead of drawing so much smut, all their stories are like this :/ their artstyle is good so I don’t know why.
Anyways the story is cute I guess, I like the idea of the pathetic ml who is subservient given how he sees any love interest as a correlation to his childhood, ie, he has major abandonment issues, I could guess he had a bad childhood from chapter one with the way he was being all over the mc. The mc is so boring tho. Like boiled chicken, cmon, give us personality, backstory anything that isn’t just being “in love” with the ml.
I liked the abo au better than the main sorry cause at least it had a plot, and I wanted to see more of it esp with the comments and how they get thru it. The ml seems the type to become more “psychotic” to outsiders, so that’d be fun, but so far we haven’t seen this. But I can guess most of the plot cause the author regurgitates the same concepts in all their stories.
I wish the characters were more fleshed out, I know the author usually does “porn with a side plot” but cmon. What do we know about mc? That he had a dog? Okay… his personality? He just smiles and goes along with everything.. at least the ml has a personality that all other characters in the authors story which is being a pathetic, wimpy kid in a way who is good to the mc but is pretty rude to others. I wish the author just tried to actualise a story instead of drawing so much smut, all their stories are like this :/ their artstyle is good so I don’t know why.
Anyways the story is cute I guess, I like the idea of the pathetic ml who is subservient given how he sees any love interest as a correlation to his childhood, ie, he has major abandonment issues, I could guess he had a bad childhood from chapter one with the way he was being all over the mc. The mc is so boring tho. Like boiled chicken, cmon, give us personality, backstory anything that isn’t just being “in love” with the ml.
I liked the abo au better than the main sorry cause at least it had a plot, and I wanted to see more of it esp with the comments and how they get thru it. The ml seems the type to become more “psychotic” to outsiders, so that’d be fun, but so far we haven’t seen this. But I can guess most of the plot cause the author regurgitates the same concepts in all their stories.
5/10, but as smut with little plot 8/10
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