The story was peak up until the persimmon poisoning. After that point, it becomes disorganized and unfocused. There’s little meaningful character development, and most of the side characters are sloppy and forgettable. The main character also lacks clear goals, which makes the plot feel directionless. Without proper buildup or anything compelling to anticipate, the story ends up feeling like a waste of time.
The story was peak up until the persimmon poisoning. After that point, it becomes disorganized and unfocused. There’s little meaningful character development, and most of the side characters are sloppy and forgettable. The main character also lacks clear goals, which makes the plot feel directionless. Without proper buildup or anything compelling to anticipate, the story ends up feeling like a waste of time.