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I read a long time ago that when writers don't know what to do with a story they'll usuall...

Itzarit March 8, 2026 3:38 pm

I read a long time ago that when writers don't know what to do with a story they'll usually introduce a new character. So when 3 new characters were introduced halfway through the story I got the feeling the artist wasn't sure what they were doing. The plot has a weird feeling of discuntinuity. Like, the overall plot was planned from the start but the details were just filled in messily later. It was cute but I'm a bit disappointed. I wish the relationships between characters had been explored a lot more.

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