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Omg yes! I totally agree!!!
Also your comment made me laugh out loud "the author doesn't nail the sex enough to enjoy it the whole chapter"
Tbh very usual thing to happen in bl xd smexy scenes just going on for ages and it feels even longer when you wait weeks for new chapters and it takes a month for the plot to actually develop more, i feel like its less noticeable when there are already a lot more chapters out but thats just my take
It’s weird that they have chemistry outside of sex. The omega being snappy and annoyed and getting into the alpha’s face is cool, but all that goes out the window the moment they start having sex. Which somehow diminishes the story. Sure the kid tried to take control once but the author didn’t actually let him. And the rest is really just meaninglesssex. Chapter 20 is the worst offender. Nothing justified the sex scene there lasting the whole chapter, especially considering no new or interesting interactions were unlocked. And no offense to the artist, but they don’t nail the sex enough to enjoy it the whole chapter long.