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ohhh that's what i thought something is missing becuz everything is rushed. the premise is actually good so i hope the pacing would be better after the hiatus
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ohhh that's what i thought something is missing becuz everything is rushed. the premise is actually good so i hope the pacing would be better after the hiatus
I fw the premise. A strong, intelligent, lady with a pawn shop (e.g. secondhand goods and recycling?? 10/10) who doesn’t just crumple when shit happens and actually has problem solving/pattern recognition skills?? IM SAT. but the plot is going way too fast, what could’ve been multiple 10+ chap arcs are summarized in like- 20 something chapters. especially with the relationships between the characters and how soon the BBEG was revealed
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