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Yeah, plot is quite forced and inconsistent, some aspects clearly pushed just to meet author's general idea for the story, without any sense, storytelling and pacing definitely below expectation for me
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Yeah, plot is quite forced and inconsistent, some aspects clearly pushed just to meet author's general idea for the story, without any sense, storytelling and pacing definitely below expectation for me
The story is sometimes overly dramatic, but it's okay and short. The only thing I didn't like was how the uke didn't admit he cheated and asked the ML for forgiveness. They were dating when it happened, at least the first time might not be uke's fault, but then he walks to meet the black haired ML on his own made it habit and that's how he ended up getting imprinted on. Why didn't the MC tried calling injun when he wasn't with the bastard ML? I mean he could have and I am sure injun would have left everything and rush back for him.