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Read the first 2 chapters and the writing is incredibly cliché and cringe, does it get be...

QingTheB March 11, 2026 9:32 pm

Read the first 2 chapters and the writing is incredibly cliché and cringe, does it get better??

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    Azrael March 11, 2026 11:27 pm

    In my personal opinion no not really, but others may think different

    sunneater March 12, 2026 12:08 am

    it doesn't lol.but it's not horrible I still read it weekly

    pearlreads March 12, 2026 2:17 am

    lol no

    snowrin March 12, 2026 4:46 am

    This one belongs to the "it's so bad it's good" category. In other words: the writing is s bad and over the top cliche that it feels like satire.

    It's probably not meant to be satire, but it feels exactly like reading satire

    QingTheB March 12, 2026 11:23 am
    This one belongs to the "it's so bad it's good" category. In other words: the writing is s bad and over the top cliche that it feels like satire.It's probably not meant to be satire, but it feels exactly like r... snowrin

    Don't know if I have it in me to suffer through it. A bad storyline is one thing but bad writing....

    snowrin March 12, 2026 1:15 pm
    Don't know if I have it in me to suffer through it. A bad storyline is one thing but bad writing.... QingTheB

    I love satire, memes and cursed comedy; and as such I like this manhwa but yeah, it is very poorly written.

    Iloveblackgreentops March 12, 2026 1:47 pm

    Tbh this story is not bad but not that good, the white ml is way better than the main ml, ml is a bit problematic to me he says omegas are whore and then stalks the mc in the whole story and jets jealous whenever the white ml talks and chats with mc.
    The plot is about the ml dad and mc dad about the company and how mc dad work gets stolen and not recognized blah blah, and the ml gets revenge by gaining proof and helps mc dad to win the case and gets his deserved recognition back and the mc by helping his dad so yeah that's the plot

    QingTheB March 13, 2026 1:21 am
    Tbh this story is not bad but not that good, the white ml is way better than the main ml, ml is a bit problematic to me he says omegas are whore and then stalks the mc in the whole story and jets jealous whene... Iloveblackgreentops

    I guess?? Sounds kinda lame LMAOOO. Is the smut at least decent?

    Iloveblackgreentops March 13, 2026 10:20 am
    I guess?? Sounds kinda lame LMAOOO. Is the smut at least decent? QingTheB

    I don't know about smut since the ml ra**es the mc without consent and they both were in heat and rut if I could remember, but I guess you can say the smut is decent